Nice! This sounds like it could be used in the Timesplitters franchise. The synths throughout are exquisite. The guitar adds much to the shoot-em-up action of this piece. Your snare drums sound as if they are clipping though.
The loop points are nice as well.
Overall, I'd like to hear more from you. You seem like you know what you're dong when it comes to this style of aural action.
4/5 8/10